Hi again, i'm doing a 24page magasin this month for hour school, and i really like this one. the little random scribble would be nice if it was handmade, maybe a bit booring with just a 1pt wight stroke (sry, but i'm dead honset). other then that great work
The scribble is to take your eye to the heading - since it can be confusing when everything is diagonal. It also goes with the photo of the wall, has graffiti on it in chalk and its like a scrapbook feeling. It might not work as well as i thought though. Hope you feeling better - are you coming to Leics spur andmovie tomo?